Antigone Cadmus

Ok...medium legnth mousy brown hair you keep pulled back in a pony tail. Hmm, you're closer!

ooooh... phsycadelic! *is mesmerized* That's really cool looking. It kind of looks like play dough, ha. Where did you get the program? Is it like paint, but fun? Paint really ...

This is a good start. Much of my critigue is the same as Lord Anzius'. You just started writing in English? That's impressive! This isn't even your native language, yet ...

Banned for banning your sister.

My hair is dark, but you got the length wrong, and my eyes are far from blue. Ok, your hair! Uh... give us a hint! At least tell us length? ...

This is well written, but I wouldn't call it a fan fic. I would call it fan plagiarism. The dialogue is nearly verbatim to the dialogue in "The Sorcerer's Stone". ...

I read Cell. I was looking for a good scare, but what I found instead was a cliche apocalyptic novel. Like all Stephen King books, the book needed to be ...

Well, this one is stupid :) It was used by my friend who was late to swim practice: "Sorry I was late. I was helping build my family's couch." it ...

8/10 I like the first quote.

6/10 Disney scares me...

Short red hair that frames your round face. Brown eyes. I'm bad at this ;)

8/10

Are you...a...a... Janey?

oh my god! I wrote this huge review and it was erased! I swear I'll finish it later. God! This sucks.

All right, thanks :) Sorry, if I was rude before, but it was really bothering me lol No time to mess around, I thought as I dropped my hand like ...